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5月4日雅思写作思路解析(附7分范文)

2019-05-10

来源:环球教育

小编:长安 167
摘要:

  5月第一场雅思考试结束了,不知道大家考得如何?跟随上海环球教育余曰简老师来看看这次的写作题目、范文和解析吧!

  05-04  观点类题型 – 社会话题

  The increasing use of technology in the workplace has made it easier for young people to get work an hard for old people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  题目大意:

  新技术在企业的普及,让青年比老年人更有求职优势。同意还是反对

  思路:

  To what extent do you agree or disagree,建议采用折中的部分同意/反对的立场;在文章中采用双边论证。

  将get work这一抽象的概念予以细分后,根据不同工作有不同的侧重,讨论年轻和年老的求职者各自的优势。如某些工作注重新技术的应用,年轻人求职有优势;而另一些工作,则不是由依赖技术优势,更依赖年长者的经验和人脉等。

  审题,找出关键词:

  made it easier for young people to get work:get work是一个抽象概念(在具体论证中,需要分成不同的具体工种,并分析各自的需求,才可以讨论是青年还是老人更有竞争优势)

  提纲梳理如下:


  范文:

  Some people claim that the computerized era makes the younger generation more competitive than their senior counterparts in job seeking. While it maybe the truth in the case of some businesses, I would say that there are many other fields where old people have their unique strength over young rivals.

  On the one hand, in some technological industries, young job seekers who can manipulate computers or software do have more opportunities than old people.This is particularly obvious in positions like programming and IT engineering,where the proficiency in computer know-how and potential learning capabilityare the key consideration for employers. That is why there are usually thresholds set for the age of applicants in these occupations, given the general belief that young people are more adapted to the ever-changing trend of new technology.

  On the other hand,there are other jobs which do not require proficiency in technological skills. The sales, for example, is one of those positions that attaches more importance on experience and business connections, both of which are the advantages of senior employees, as it takes years to accumulate the knowledge and establish network in a certain field. The same is true for consulting companies, where the profound insight from an experienced expert is far more reliable and persuasive to clients.The last fact we cannot afford to ignore is that in almost all countries, whether these be developed or developing ones, it is the elderly who take the position of president, no matter how much the government values new technology.

  In conclusion, it is undeniable that old people are eclipsed by young talents in certain technological positions, but it seems to me that senior citizens still have their role to play in many sectors in this high-tech age.

  相关词汇:

  Manipulate  熟练掌握

  Rival竞争者

  know-how  专业知识

  threshold  门槛

  proficiency  专业能力

  connections人脉

  insight  远见

  相关句型:

  Thesame is true for …

  Thelast fact we cannot afford to ignore is that …

  5月11日场口语高频话题

  1. 空闲时间做的事

  Describe a time you enjoyed your free time.

  2. 你知道的实用技能

  Describea practical skill you know

  3.孩子们逗你笑的经历

  Describea time that children made you laugh

  4.历史建筑

  Describea historical building

  5. 业余时间帮助他人

  Describea person who helps others in his or her spare time

  6.感兴趣的历史

  Describe a period of time in the history of yourcountry that you are interested in.

  7.别人帮助下做的决定

  Describe an important decision made with the help of other people.

  8.好的生活方式

  Describea lifestyle that you think is good

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  Task 1 柱状图

  Task 2

  Some people think certain old buildings are worth preserving more than the other ones. Which types of old buildings should be preserved?Do you think the advantages of preserving old buildings outweigh the disadvantages?

  2019年4月25日

  Task 1 折线题

  Task 2

  Young people are leaving their homes from rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

  2019年4月13日

  Task 1 折线题

  Task 2

  Some people believe thatfamous people's support towards international aid organizations draws theattention to problems, while others think celebrities make the problems lessimportant. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

  2019年4月6日

  Task 1 柱状图

  Task 2

  Some people believe that the best way to reduce the time to travel to work is replace gardens and parks with apartment buildings, which commuters can live. Others disagree.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

  2019年3月23日

  Task 1 流程图

  Task 2

  Once children start school, teachers have more influenceon their intellectual and social development than parents do. To what extent doyou agree or disagree?

  2019年3月14日

  Task 1  柱状图

  Task 2

  Newspapers have an enormous influence on people's ideas and views. Why? Positive or negative?

  2019年3月9日

  Task 1 柱状图

  Task 2

  As part of education,students should spend a period of time studying and living in a different country to learn language and culture. To what extant do you agree or disagree?

  2019年3月2日

  Task 1  柱状图

  Task 2

  Employers should give their staff at least a 4-week holiday a year to make employees better at their jobs. To what extend do you agree or disagree?


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